循环 发表于 2024-6-1 04:34   全显示 1楼
写的比原世界观鲜活多了，斗罗原著非史莱克七怪的配角塑造的都挺单薄的。
作者塑造疯狂的人物形象的笔墨很好啊，原著基础上拓展的人物故事也不算突兀，只不过大师这个角色确实很难绷，原著就整得挺搞笑的。
百合部分写的也十分具有淫靡堕落的味，故事与颜色融合的恰到好处，抛开颜色部分也是一部优秀的同人作品了。
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