bierhoff 发表于 2008-12-29 17:05   全显示 1楼
个人感觉情节有点虚弱,不够曲折,春丽的形象不够丰满,如果没有个性的话,她就不叫春丽,也就失去了最大的意义,一开始就上重戏也会导致下文的失色,导致增加情节难度,当然相信楼主的写作能力,定会写出更加精彩的下文
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